Friday, September 23, 2005

The Last Words That Fall From Knowing Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can hear you whispering
in the night silence of my room
my heart surrenders to you...
like the sun to the moon.
...
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
COMMENTS
Uriah Hamilton 23 September 2005

A very beautiful love poem that has a certain sadness to it as well.

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Allan James Saywell 23 September 2005

eila this is very beautiful i felt this poem it gave me a warm feeling that touched me deep within Warm regards AJS

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Mary Nagy 23 September 2005

Oh my gosh, this is so...beautiful Eila. This is exactly how I felt whenever I looked into my husband's eyes. I really loved this poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Seán O' Muiriosa 23 September 2005

This poem fascinated me! I really like it. I love the final stanza and especially the final embrace. Excellent. Warm regards, Seán

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