The Last Words Of A Dying Man Comments

Finally abeeb writes. Nice poem with much room for improvement

you write very well. a great poet in the making. join me on FB introduce you to poetry groups. persian khushi

Every man will pass through death. Good try

Good poem.'Keep writing cos I know it is not time to say good night despite the odds

This is actually good, very well structured you pretty talented, don't ever stop writing

Hey, this is quite good Kareem, Yes Quite Good! Very impressive for a young man of your age... keep writing... always be writing... never stop.! Great Write! ! ! ; -) -Kelly

please, I would like everyone that reads this poem to tell me how good or bad it is.Thanks!