The Last Words He Ever Said Comments

So heart-touching. Some moments leave indelible marks. The reader can feel the pain of parting. A beautiful write. A10.

We all have to leave, someday. We are all in the same boat, sailing towards some kinda paradise. Sorry for your loss

Deep loss is the surface of deep love. Your loss is so profoundly great because of the profound depths of the love that lay beneath the surface. In the image of a single tear, you have moved your readers' hearts to plunge beneath the surface of that pain; you have drawn upon our shared experiences of humanity and brought us humbly to the quiet place where we must face the reality that to live deeply, to love deeply, to walk deeply in the discourse of this life, we must not only risk great loss, but certainly plunge into its cold embrace. A wondrous tribute, dear poet. S

pain and grief writ strong in every line and word...it couldn't be more potent than this... the lost love drips at every stop... very well written liked

Norah, I'm supposed to write a comment here. But how can I? How can any of us? There is such love pulsing under each word, such love and such grieving, that all we can do is stand here bearing witness. I am sorry, Norah, but I am glad you had such a wonderful love.