Tuesday, September 15, 2009

The Last With Lust... Comments

Rating: 4.8

The last with lust...
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hazem al jaber
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Alison Cassidy 27 September 2009

Your have a fine poetic voice with a penchant for the ladies. A masterpiece of a poem - fiery and passionate. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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you have deep passion in your heart...I like your poem... :)

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Lovita Lara 21 September 2009

wow, i love this poem... so romantic... so nice.. keep it up

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Mahsa Mahdavi 19 September 2009

Nice.very nice...! ! !

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The Lost.. 19 September 2009

your poem is really more than wonderfull..... I like it... keep writing.. cauze i felt that I am the one who are talking not you It's really more than wonderfull THANK U for your comments :)

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

here i am your panel which you seeks for... waiting your touches... waiting your colors... needing you as paintbrush... to draw me through your fires.. and to fire each others.. Rachel Ann Butler

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 17 September 2009

' The Last With Lust'... you painted a beautiful picture of striking images and colored emotions. A masterful job, a 10+++

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Jackie Mcgee 16 September 2009

oh you know how this makes me feel great job write more

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Maria Barbara Korynt 16 September 2009

Poem, have maximum of emotion. Desire, passion and love, are starting imagination which is creating pictures causing shiver... for sensitive persons. It is feel, in every word. The author certainly gave a lot of heart and own emotions, what the poem became real. I like it very much it. (10v.) Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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D.D Sherman 16 September 2009

very sensitive and romantic, the punctuations made it more sensual do give feedback on my poems as well :)

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Mimi Brown 16 September 2009

Very nice poem, I would change one word, please.. The word panel has many definitions. Try using canvas, as in artist's canvas. I feel it would lend to the poem's flow. Thank you for allowing me to read your poem. Regards, Mimi

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Sally Plumb Plumb 16 September 2009

I thuoght this was a lovely poem.

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Black & White Right 16 September 2009

did you check out my subconscience while writing this? Poets..... you are so dangerous! lyrically romantic

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Lady Grace 16 September 2009

uhum...nice ha...romantic as ever...

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Tamara - Hanaring 16 September 2009

a wonderful warm poem, well said

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Catrina Heart 15 September 2009

lovely poem, you have dragged me with your soothing words and phrases..........Thanks!

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Joseph Poewhit 15 September 2009

Woman have a way of molding men

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