The last with lust...
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you have deep passion in your heart...I like your poem... :)
wow, i love this poem... so romantic... so nice.. keep it up
your poem is really more than wonderfull..... I like it... keep writing.. cauze i felt that I am the one who are talking not you It's really more than wonderfull THANK U for your comments :)
here i am your panel which you seeks for... waiting your touches... waiting your colors... needing you as paintbrush... to draw me through your fires.. and to fire each others.. Rachel Ann Butler
' The Last With Lust'... you painted a beautiful picture of striking images and colored emotions. A masterful job, a 10+++
Poem, have maximum of emotion. Desire, passion and love, are starting imagination which is creating pictures causing shiver... for sensitive persons. It is feel, in every word. The author certainly gave a lot of heart and own emotions, what the poem became real. I like it very much it. (10v.) Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt
very sensitive and romantic, the punctuations made it more sensual do give feedback on my poems as well :)
Very nice poem, I would change one word, please.. The word panel has many definitions. Try using canvas, as in artist's canvas. I feel it would lend to the poem's flow. Thank you for allowing me to read your poem. Regards, Mimi
did you check out my subconscience while writing this? Poets..... you are so dangerous! lyrically romantic
lovely poem, you have dragged me with your soothing words and phrases..........Thanks!
Your have a fine poetic voice with a penchant for the ladies. A masterpiece of a poem - fiery and passionate. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥