Monday, March 2, 2009

The Last Winter Storm Comments

Rating: 4.8

The Last Winter Storm

Every year, at the scheduled arrival of March,
Mother Nature became seasonally enraged,
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Noel Horlanda 16 July 2009

It's a chilly winter all right. Although we don't have winter season here in the Philippines but I could just imagine how cold it would be if it happens here. We have only rainy season or typhoon season 120 of them visits us annually. They're still chilly to the bone and destructive. Nice write and very informative, pal. Thanks

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Vidi Writes 25 April 2009

Its very chilling still alarming to readers like me Who didn't fall into such seasonal shores The picture square is very perfect I can see the climate and the conditions that have a say. Good one.

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Jack Price 20 April 2009

This type of poem will get me every time. I love poems about the end of winter and the beginning of spring. You write it and I will read it. Great poem and a 10+ for me. Keep up the great work Hebert!

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Cristy Upshaw 18 April 2009

Ah, the last winter storm. We get plenty of 'last' winter storms here, even in Spring. Truly a blissful and stunning write. Great imagery and metaphors.

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Kefentse Sathekge 03 April 2009

great metaphor, we can wait and hope the crisis will cease

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Christine Kerr 13 March 2009

Following in the same steps as the last Black Out, Very well done. Thankyou Hebert for some different memories

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Noel Horlanda 13 March 2009

Got your message, Bert. Here I am perusing your great work all about winter season. Although I've never experience such act of nature, however it could be just the same going into wet or rainy season here in the tropics. The only difference is it's not so cold here as compared to your situation.over there. Anyway, my verdict is double thumbs up. Well done.

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Pamela Lutwyche 11 March 2009

You set your stage very well and then the play began and may I add it was a very good play indeed. I could see in my minds eye mother nature herself throwing everything she had got in to your that storm. Well done

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Brittany Evans 08 March 2009

i loved it! so rich in details, a poet or writers best work of art

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Michelle Melody 08 March 2009

A very nice write Herbert

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Icy Rivas 08 March 2009

very good poem! ! lots of nice details and greatly put together

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Ronald Speight 08 March 2009

great attention to detail this is a great poem

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wow, loved it; i love poems that use personification, especially with nature...those kind are my favorite. most of my poems that i write are nature based and environmental (though not all of them are on this website) . good, no great job and thanks for sharing. -Every rose starts out as an ash-Ashes 2 Roses :)

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Monica Hinson 06 March 2009

I like this poem. Its different. Not like one Ive ever read. Keep up the good work!

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Shani Bogamuwa 06 March 2009

Lovely song, I can just imagine everything.And it's lovely

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~ Jon London ~ 06 March 2009

A brilliant visual slide through the seasons, your lines fall gently down the page like a soft blacket of snow, that puts a coolness to your expression...nice job

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Himaya Marinas 05 March 2009

The poem was quite good.I think it mixed with classic and a modern term.I'm just wandering what's the drama behind Valentine's Day.

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Lynda Robson 04 March 2009

A wonderful poem Hebert, the calm after the storm, well penned, 10 Lynda xx

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 March 2009

A beautiful poem about the mother nature's anger every year, a kind anger indeed which results in a new spring, a new season of life.

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Lee Crowell 03 March 2009

I've never considered how tragic the changing of a season can be. Herbert, you give me reason to reflect about this phenomenon. Thank you

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