The Last Winter Storm
Every year, at the scheduled arrival of March,
Mother Nature became seasonally enraged,
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Its very chilling still alarming to readers like me Who didn't fall into such seasonal shores The picture square is very perfect I can see the climate and the conditions that have a say. Good one.
This type of poem will get me every time. I love poems about the end of winter and the beginning of spring. You write it and I will read it. Great poem and a 10+ for me. Keep up the great work Hebert!
Ah, the last winter storm. We get plenty of 'last' winter storms here, even in Spring. Truly a blissful and stunning write. Great imagery and metaphors.
great metaphor, we can wait and hope the crisis will cease
Following in the same steps as the last Black Out, Very well done. Thankyou Hebert for some different memories
Got your message, Bert. Here I am perusing your great work all about winter season. Although I've never experience such act of nature, however it could be just the same going into wet or rainy season here in the tropics. The only difference is it's not so cold here as compared to your situation.over there. Anyway, my verdict is double thumbs up. Well done.
You set your stage very well and then the play began and may I add it was a very good play indeed. I could see in my minds eye mother nature herself throwing everything she had got in to your that storm. Well done
i loved it! so rich in details, a poet or writers best work of art
wow, loved it; i love poems that use personification, especially with nature...those kind are my favorite. most of my poems that i write are nature based and environmental (though not all of them are on this website) . good, no great job and thanks for sharing. -Every rose starts out as an ash-Ashes 2 Roses :)
I like this poem. Its different. Not like one Ive ever read. Keep up the good work!
A brilliant visual slide through the seasons, your lines fall gently down the page like a soft blacket of snow, that puts a coolness to your expression...nice job
The poem was quite good.I think it mixed with classic and a modern term.I'm just wandering what's the drama behind Valentine's Day.
A wonderful poem Hebert, the calm after the storm, well penned, 10 Lynda xx
A beautiful poem about the mother nature's anger every year, a kind anger indeed which results in a new spring, a new season of life.
I've never considered how tragic the changing of a season can be. Herbert, you give me reason to reflect about this phenomenon. Thank you
It's a chilly winter all right. Although we don't have winter season here in the Philippines but I could just imagine how cold it would be if it happens here. We have only rainy season or typhoon season 120 of them visits us annually. They're still chilly to the bone and destructive. Nice write and very informative, pal. Thanks