When the last train chugs out of the station
the doppler sound mingles
with his unseen tears' flow
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Sad and touching write indeed. Beautiful flow of words, with touching lines..I got nowhere to go. It's so sad when a person faces such situation in his life. This had really happened with many. You have depicted it very well in this poem. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.
Death of an eldest who survived long..vacating the generation of equivalent supposed to be a poem with deep core thank you Pradip10
This sounds like the lament of a homeless person with no one and no place to call his own. How sad, but beautifully written.
Very touching indeed when bidding farewell at a station..........very well expressed with touching lines.............
Such a moving write.... the agony of a man who is a homeless vagabond is so poignantly pictured! The state of having no where to go is such a miserable state!