The Last Train Comments

I guess we readers are left to our own conclusions. ;)

An interesting poem indeed. It underscores your skill as a story-teller who knows his craft perfectly well. There is suspense and a mysterious end to the narrative. The reader is left with not one but umpteenth choices. Thanks.

never take the LAST TRAIN IT may prove to be your LAST LOL AAAAAAAAAAAA RRRRR U R A LOVELIEST COMMENTATOR HOPE YOU ARE A CRICKETER

It also reminded me the song " Gadi Bula rahi hai seeti baja rahi hai.....Aate hain log jate hain log, paani ke jaise rele jane ke baad aate hai yaad guzre hue woh mele yaadein mita rahi hain, yaadein bana rahi hai.........

Yes very true, the train of this life will continue like this, some will board and some will alight but the train and it's journey will continue till eternity.10**

We all get caught sometimes at the wrong stations right۔ nice poem۔.5***

Excellent poem my friend! Straight to my list!