The Last Train Comments

I love to board on last trains of my dearest souls, I know I would never make it. Thanks Sir.

Last train yet to arrive. We have to wait.

What is the destination? What is the destiny either. Who wrote it? Did you? ....Destiny a big question........... you hve very well pictured it dear poet. The polestar Off the horizon. thank you. tony

The last train never arrives.we have to wait.

Hi Binaya, Very deep and poignant poem “The willow o wisp in the palm beach Recedes to replace The polestar Off the horizon” wonderful expression..

Lovely poem.Thanks for sharing.

Who wrote the destiny? Nice thought.

For the desert thirst throttled My heart For ice turns Blood in my frigid veins. Nice composition.