It was just the last night we were together
while she smiled, talked and touched my hands
then we walked alone on the road,
towards an ice cream stall
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wow.....really grt..... i never imagined such an ending....kp writing..
I love your poem......... Nicely written.......... I like your vocabulary used Good luck with your poems Guess Who
So beautiful, I; love the way you write, this one make me feel as if you where flying somewhere in paradise feeling it flowing with it and than reality strikes you wake up with fear and doubts but all it takes is just letting go and fly on the wings of love. Beautiful! ! ! !