Friday, April 27, 2012

The Last Time She Met Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was just the last night we were together
while she smiled, talked and touched my hands
then we walked alone on the road,
towards an ice cream stall
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prakhar mishra
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Kasia Fedyk 28 June 2012

So beautiful, I; love the way you write, this one make me feel as if you where flying somewhere in paradise feeling it flowing with it and than reality strikes you wake up with fear and doubts but all it takes is just letting go and fly on the wings of love. Beautiful! ! ! !

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Neetha Sasidharan 01 May 2012

wow.....really grt..... i never imagined such an ending....kp writing..

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Madhavi Grace 01 May 2012

its beautiful...........keep writing

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Guess Who 27 April 2012

I love your poem......... Nicely written.......... I like your vocabulary used Good luck with your poems Guess Who

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