Friday, November 30, 2007

The Last Time Comments

Rating: 4.5

Dieing slow
my last seconds
all you don't want
crying on my shoulder
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live to die
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Marvin Brato 25 June 2008

Sometimes its too late to realized what 'I love you ' really meant... only know it when it is spoken the last time! Well penned, high marks.

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Arabian Heart 23 June 2008

to never hear those words from a loved once lips make me feel pain i thought i had lost do you wish to hear the words words can make thing feel very powerful be careful on how you use such power

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