Sunday, January 24, 2016

The Last Summer Comments

Rating: 5.0

I passed them while they were picnicking
On a bench overlooking the sea,
These two lovers.
She was dressed in a yellow dress.
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Lynn W. Petty
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Chinedu Dike 12 June 2017

Rich flow of thought and captivating images - romantic and very passionate. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Lynn.

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Bri Edwards 15 September 2016

i KNOW i have read this fine tableau tale. where in my head did the word tableau come from? ! i have probably never written or spoken the word in my 68 years! if i did read this before, where is my comment? oh well, any previous comment doesn't count. nicely done, old chap. bri :)

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Lynn W. Petty

Lynn W. Petty

Newport Beach, California
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