Tuesday, May 9, 2023

The Last Stroke Comments

Rating: 3.7

If honesty could be increased by taking a pill,
I would have given you a thousand pills,
For you have got an honesty deficiency syndrome,
Nothing about you is real, was real.
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Nabakishore Dash 16 May 2023

First stanza is what is written subsequently.inyelligent crafting.

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Rajan T Renganathan 10 May 2023

Your suffering and pain is unequitable. I liked your first two lines very much....Had there being any pills to increase honesty...5******

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Oscar Munir 10 July 2023

Thanks mate

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Gerald Opio 09 May 2023

This is great countrymate, I can feel the pain. Keep on sharing.

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Oscar Munir

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