Monday, July 12, 2021

The Last Stop Before Home-Pantoum Comments

Rating: 5.0

The next stop is the one I've waited for so long,
So eager now to see the smiling folks back home,
For memory now plays an old well-known love song,
Ever drawing one back, no matter where they roam.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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M Asim Nehal 14 July 2021

It is long time since i have seen a locomotive. The engine and the whistle is still fresh and permanently itched in my memory. Brilliant poem with fantastic painting.5***

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Kostas Lagos 14 July 2021

You are painting excellent poemscapes Evelyn!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 July 2021

A very pleasant pantoum to read, I enjoyed enormously, nostalgian thoughts well worded, beautiful!

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Varsha M 12 July 2021

Excellent pantoum Evelyn. It was a pleasure to read this style after do long. Beautiful. Made my heart smile. The theme of poem is nostalgic memories so well presented through this style. Good job. In to my favourite.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 July 2021

The recurring lines enhanced the beauty of this write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 July 2021

A wonderful and touching poem full of great memories. This poem resonates with me. Another marvelous poem adorn with great images and nice rhythm

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