Monday, February 15, 2016

The Last Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today, the birds were chirping
As if this is their last song
So melodious, so pure
Is there something different
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 10 August 2016

A song to remember... For them time has no meaning Clock is another tool invented By humans to count their gains or losses I heard the beautiful prayer In their singing, O Lord Save us, protect us from these humans We had enough of pollution We lost enough of trees They do not allow us to eat freely We are fed up with the organic food

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Darren Jkoeryo 13 May 2016

O Lord, please give us back The breeze of heavens one last time The sunshine, the rainbow, the flowing river Those lush green trees with fruits and flowers That calmness of morning To sing our beautiful songs.

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Nosheen Irfan 17 February 2016

A thought-provoking poem, highlighting the issue of pollution in a beautiful way. Nature must be preserved. A fair plea from birds. Their songs r a symbol of life. They must sing.10

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Abhilasha Bhatt 15 February 2016

O Lord, please give us back The breeze of heavens one last time.....he gave us this chance many times but we were not able to recognize it due to our acts.....Beautiful sharing....liked it......thank you sir :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 February 2016

These humans! Who only destroy the world. Nice piece of work.

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