Thursday, September 25, 2014

The Last Smile Comments

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To me, my mother told,
When she saw me after my birth,
And touched my cheeks,
I smiled and she prayed,
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Farhan Mirza 09 June 2015

I love the way you wrote this poem, I really like this poem.

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Savita Tyagi 28 September 2014

There is heaven in a new born's smile. A tired mother's only wish is to keep that child away from harm's way. Beautiful poem

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Rafique Farooqi 27 September 2014

Innocent smile of child for his mom is everlasting'

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Salini Nair 26 September 2014

Oh God! Keep this smile forever.....wish of every mother....................nice

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Valsa George 26 September 2014

A mother's prayer for his baby even inside her womb reaches his ears through electro magnetic waves! That's why the would be mothers are advised to have good thoughts only! If you see my body, Smiling after death, Snap it and preserve, And propagate, As a witness of the fact, There is a life after death. Enjoyed your last wish...... a smile on the lips witnessing Heaven's glory awaiting! A Very innocent wish!

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Khalida Bano Ali 25 September 2014

Man ki dua jannat ki hawa. (A mother's prayer is a pleasant wind from para dise)

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