The Last Scene Comments
who am i?
to stop the call of death
who am i?
to ignore the sound of trumphets...
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Painful fo me to read as I have been down that road with life support involved, however the poem is truthful to the facts of life and its sororws...written with compassion...+++10 regards
A beautifully written poem showing how death is something we cannot avoid and your faith in God shines through, 10 Lynda xx
A passionate plea and well penned emotions cast poetically here.
If only we could haold back the tide of life, but sadly one by one we all are travelling towards the sunset. A very moving piece of writing, but there is no death, but a life eternal where sadness and cruelty, violence and evil no longer reside. A paradise. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Really a pathetic story to read, a lady communicating her love which he cannot hear and respond.
A truly touching piece, that reaches out for a caring soul....expressed with honesty that reflects your hearts plea...of understanding...very emotional my lovely...10++....from me for sure
loaded with anguish and helplessness a cry for help anfd understanding... the stuff of care and compassion well written cheers
a loved ones cry to save their beloved. how touching. nice write voted10 surya
such sadness but your writing is amazing you convey all the emotions 10
Very emotional and heart wrenching one. To feel that and express is quite a thing to do. 10+++
the poem conveys the sorrowful emotion, the central theme inside, very well there...good work Grace...10
Heart wrenching. You put so much powerful emotion into your poems. Excellent writing as usual. 10 Karin Anderson
a piteous render of verses you presented....as I' ve seen the scenario always at my job...you did it well....10
Very touching, very sentimental poem, reminding the helplessness of humans, when faced with great difficulties. Well penned!
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8/6/2025 2:17:30 AM # 1.0.0
oh my, this is so lovely, and so fitting, my friends life support was switched off yesterday and died a couple of hours later, so fitting so beautiful and now im crying! ! !