who am i?
to stop the call of death
who am i?
to ignore the sound of trumphets...
i can't..that's why
i am nothing, , , yes i am.
i am useless...i'm so useless
i can't stop the call from heaven
HE is more powerful than me
HE owns our lives
fate and destiny...
look at my eyes dear
you said my eyes gives you life
please don't go..i am helping to fight for this struggle
please try to understand what my lip says...
do you hear me? don't stop looking at me
so you can understand what i'm saying
do you still remember the words i hate?
i don't want you to say goodbye..not even goodnight..
do you feel my trembling hands dear
feel the strength that i'm giving you
do you see that crying little child at the corner?
do you think we can manage if your'e not here?
but...you're journey here perhaps is too short
tho i don't want you to go
tho i want you to stay here
but i can't..i can't really do...
honey please...don't close your eyes
i will do all my best to pull you from this call of death
let me whisper this words for you...
i love you..i love you...please don't go...i love you...
If only we could haold back the tide of life, but sadly one by one we all are travelling towards the sunset. A very moving piece of writing, but there is no death, but a life eternal where sadness and cruelty, violence and evil no longer reside. A paradise. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Really a pathetic story to read, a lady communicating her love which he cannot hear and respond.
A truly touching piece, that reaches out for a caring soul....expressed with honesty that reflects your hearts plea...of understanding...very emotional my lovely...10++....from me for sure
oh my, this is so lovely, and so fitting, my friends life support was switched off yesterday and died a couple of hours later, so fitting so beautiful and now im crying! ! !
Painful fo me to read as I have been down that road with life support involved, however the poem is truthful to the facts of life and its sororws...written with compassion...+++10 regards
A beautifully written poem showing how death is something we cannot avoid and your faith in God shines through, 10 Lynda xx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A passionate plea and well penned emotions cast poetically here.