The Last Sad Loss And Fall Comments

Being first in the race is so hard, The frazzle may make you stumble; If you're left alone at the tail end, LAST means Learn About Standing Tall. Very clever poem, sir Bernard. I enjoyed it.

Being first in the race is so hard, The frazzle may make you stumble; Interesting first two lines, dear Ber....................

If you cry in distress and sorrow, Lonely, torn, and due for repair; Dry the tears in your eyes, for SAD denotes Smile Away Despair. I love this stanza, dear Bernard.........................

This piece is very clever and inspiring, Bernard...............

What a very clever and inspirational poem

FANTASTIC! Beautifully crafted quatrain. Very inspiring write. The words SAD, LOSS and FALL embedded in the write with their corresponding meanings made this write very clever.10 +++ and on to my Poem List.

very nice poem. thanks for sharing. Dinyar Bharucha.

Talk about inspirational and motivational! And fun! Great job, Bernard! ! ! A solid 10! ! ! !

Superb! Thats all i can say :) ...Thank you, Bernard :) Perfect 10

Amazing, really amazing. I loved your play with words and especially with the word fall. It means a lot to me and this is so positive! Beautiful :) I can relate so much. Thank you for commenting on mine :)

Thank you for this poem very inspiring and cleverly written.