~ The Last Rung On Your Ladder
Well-up my tears in a bottle;
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So sad. Another stunning poem. I will be reading more of your work.
Brilliantly woven, Poetic yet lyrical at the same time. very splendid! !
I love this poem, rings very true. I read quite a few of your poems and I'm honored to have received so many wonderful comments from such a talented writer. Keep it up and I'll keep mine up: -)
Your repetative emphasis onlast rung on your ladder just jells it. Sad, but Iliked it Another 10
Wow, you're right, I do like this one, (among others you have written) . Hope you find someone who respects you and never takes you for granted again. Thank you so much for sharing.
i can see why...uh i am sorry guys are jerks huh? i loved it though great emotion and repetitive lines beautiful you are worthy of being a poetry instructor lol
There is a beautiful cadence and expression in this poem. It was an enjoyable read.
An established fact......what goes up...............must..............come down!
I think this would be wonderful, set to music. You have written this very well and the theme is all to familiar to so many of us. Nice work. Raynette
How often we fail to see what's right before our eyes, and we miss the simple gifts that hold the answers to our dreams. But they will not wait forever to be discovered, and how sad to finally realize what we've lost. A very truthful tale, beautifully written. Nice flow and lilting rhythm throughout. Linda :)
Wow! ! ! ! This is so powerful... thank you for recommending it to me. Unfortunately, it doesn't remind me of my current situation but rather my ex: /