~the Last Rung On Your Ladder Poem by Adeline Foster

~the Last Rung On Your Ladder

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~ The Last Rung On Your Ladder


Well-up my tears in a bottle;
Fling them into the sea;
You didn’t hear my heart cry; you were looking too high.
The last rung on your ladder was me.

I was the last rung on your ladder,
Taken for granted too long.
Now, as you come down, watch that step at the ground;
The last rung on your ladder is gone.

I was sure of your love at the outset,
Sure that the future was fine;
But I woke up to find you had left me behind,
Down here at the end of the line.

I was the last rung on your ladder,
Taken for granted too long.
Now, as you come down, watch that step at the ground;
The last rung on your ladder is gone.

I was there when you needed my loving;
I only asked some of your time;
But my needs had to wait until now it’s too late.
The last rung on your ladder was mine.

I was the last rung on your ladder,
Taken for granted too long.
Now, as you come down, watch that step at the ground;
The last rung on your ladder is gone.

Friday, December 14, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Anderson 21 April 2012

Your repetative emphasis onlast rung on your ladder just jells it. Sad, but Iliked it Another 10

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Kara Towe 01 December 2011

Wow, you're right, I do like this one, (among others you have written) . Hope you find someone who respects you and never takes you for granted again. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Kayla Daley 10 March 2011

i can see why...uh i am sorry guys are jerks huh? i loved it though great emotion and repetitive lines beautiful you are worthy of being a poetry instructor lol

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Pensive Phoenix 28 April 2009

There is a beautiful cadence and expression in this poem. It was an enjoyable read.

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James B. Earley 01 August 2008

An established fact......what goes up...............must..............come down!

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Poetry Falcon 10 March 2016

Wow! ! ! ! This is so powerful... thank you for recommending it to me. Unfortunately, it doesn't remind me of my current situation but rather my ex: /

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Sarah Persson 03 March 2016

So sad. Another stunning poem. I will be reading more of your work.

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Olivia .o 16 February 2016

This is beautiful. Thank you for this beautiful masterpiece

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James Darwin Smith Ii 26 September 2015

Brilliantly woven, Poetic yet lyrical at the same time. very splendid! !

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Lauren Kjar 19 November 2012

I love this poem, rings very true. I read quite a few of your poems and I'm honored to have received so many wonderful comments from such a talented writer. Keep it up and I'll keep mine up: -)

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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