The Last Ride Together! Comments

i was 'with you' until the third stanza. then i fell asleep. : ( bri

Jin se Mil kar zindagi se ishq ho jaye wo log Aap ne Shayad na dekhey ho magar aisey bhi hein Kuch kehne ki meri majal nahi. Akhri 3 bando ne to had kardi. Lajawab Batool.

A very nice poem, i feel the effect of the poem on my soul.

aao kuchh der mil k sath chalen aao kuchh dur tk to sath chalen so pleasing an invitation that no man with a loving heart can reject. Sat chelenge jarur, Par karke pahd, Milkar sitaaronse, Chandini ka sundarata milke peekarke, sat chelenge Sahazia! very sweet poem my sweet friend.

beete hue lamhon ki mahek saath to hogi.........khabonm hi mein ho chahe mulaaqat to hogi.........people come and go from our lives but their imprints stay on for ever.......moulding and painting our personalities with each parting.......

kitni acchi likhti hain aap. ab main bhi apni juban ki kuchh kavitayen post karunga.

Yes; unique from any other poem i have read here; but more beautiful :) thank you for sharing.....