Saturday, December 30, 2006

The Last Resort Comments

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Tears well up, threatening to o'erspill these blackened lashes.
Blackened; That's what society calls fashion.
Little girls playing in mother's make-up.
Wind, whispering through bright, green-leaved trees.
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Elizabeth Sheaffer
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Nathan Strange 04 January 2007

Very thought provoking. I like it. Your life counts, everything you do adds to the world so make sure what you do is true or you'll end up living a wasted life! Make your life count! Stay true and don't let fashion bite at you.

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Joshua Fegley 30 December 2006

What a hypocritical and materialistic world we are cast to. Interesting poem Eliza. Keep writing.........

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Elizabeth Sheaffer

Elizabeth Sheaffer

Mt. Airy, NC
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