Monday, March 20, 2006

The Last Poem I Will Ever Write Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today is the day I will let it all go.
Pages of words, awkward
and odd, will cease
to consume my valuable time.
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COMMENTS
Raymond Wright 02 January 2008

You know Lori, each time I peruse your works I find another wonderful Gem or two. Can I be your groupie? ~Ray

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Chuck Audette 04 April 2006

No one gets out of this crab bucket that easily. Great poem, keep 'em coming. - chuck

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Kelly Allen Vinal 20 March 2006

One heck of an outstanding poem! Powerful!

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Max Reif 20 March 2006

Don't worry, maybe you'll kick the habit tomorrow! ps: I know how to play the guitar, that doesn't get me 'there' permanently, either (though it IS fun, and easy to learn) . I feel I've already been to the gym today!

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Declan McHenry 20 March 2006

Lori, that is a great piece. You've captured the mood well and I'm sure more than a few here can relate to it. Grand write.

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