Monday, June 22, 2009

The Last Piece Comments

Rating: 4.4

My apology
to those I have caused pain
to those my artificial popularity affects them
to those who thought that it's unfair and cheating
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Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness
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Hebert Logerie Sr. 26 July 2009

Have a wonderful journey and we are all awaiting your return to this poetic oasis as early with the coming of the newly decorated humming birds.

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to those my artificial popularity affects them to those who thought that it's unfair and cheating... i too was victim of same.. i fought it out with challenge and proved to the task m 4th now... good write...10 read mine.. it deeply hurts me.... can i reach on the top? .... miss i miss u, mary to marry..

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Hazem Al Jaber 02 July 2009

heartfelt sadly and great penned.. felt your warm feelings through those stunning words.. keep on my sweet poet.. hazem al..

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Rosalinda Martinez 30 June 2009

thank you for your poem. it is full of humility. keep writing and congratulations!

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Sameer Ahmed 30 June 2009

A writer should never have the last piece for he and she holds the intellect power of the populations. A unique theme written in an apologatic manner conveyed the softness core of your heart......10/10

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Afzal Shauq 30 June 2009

Thank you for your inspiring messages for your kindness for your warm friendship a good tribute to poetry friends and readers.. seems you are a good frind to poets and its good to respect the words.. kind are you and you poetry is heart feeling in the way you write from the ore of heart... best of luck 10+++++++++

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Ted M 28 June 2009

Looks like something hurt u, nevertheless, U R a good poet, keeping things very simple; yet very meaningfull. Poems R written for U' r self and when sum 1 appreciates them or helps to develop further, that's when U get that thrill of achievement. Keep it Up Hugo.

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Saadat Tahir 28 June 2009

a decision...taken in the heat of the moment...and of course ides of june mysterious and strange flurry of messages...unresolved stay a while...for poetry....for poemhunter...that is us cheers

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C. P. Sharma 24 June 2009

I am not aware of the background but the poem is truly a poetic outpouring of the heart. We look forward to many more. CP

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hi dear Joen..it seems your friend forgot what you promised..

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Afzal Shauq 23 June 2009

My heartfelt thanks for your constructive criticism for the poetry knowledge you've shared for sharing your poems its the best stanza of your poem and poem itself is very rich and charming one...liked it and its idea and the flow is melodious... well done..10+++++++

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Akram Awadat 23 June 2009

touching poem, well done

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Lynda Robson 22 June 2009

I don't know what you are apologising for, this is lovely and heartfelt, stay and write more 10 Lynda xx

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thanks for these touching words, your apology is so accepted and iam sooooo sorry too...now I can learn more of what can be gained from any pain..that is a soothing words for the mind of poets..as like that the loving spirits of poets have to be.and i appreciate your honest words and your courage....my respect for you...best wishes..................

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Jazlle, Yes, your words are extremely heartfelt and apologetic, but I don't know the reason so i will stay in the dark and say thank you for writing this poem. Love & hugs. Karin Anderson

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Catrina Heart 22 June 2009

A sincere and heartfelt poem written...Thanks for the truest words!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 22 June 2009

Very touching composition, -

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