The Last Part Comments

lovely poetry

but you give hope in the end, my friend------well done and a million stars to guide the poet and reader home

These lines hit the reader like a meteor flung from the deepest darkest corners of the universe--This is The last part of the world, With my open eyes I see a sheer fall from here towards utter despondency,

Eternal peace and serenity are what we always aimed.A wonderful poem well expressed.