The Last Of My Family Comments

go for the big finish always! good poem take it all the way which is often one more poetic line! he is my sister and my bestfriend (our bonds began before birth continue to the end of earth) I could just say nice poem stay safe reading and never getting to know the places you could go the magic carpet that words can help you ride if I cared more about the poet than the words but the poet is supposed to serve the poem like a serf