The Last Of Me Comments
Seeing the ocean so blue
I cloudlessly hear the voices singing, it was new
I will foster this view ‘til February
This could be the last of me…
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yeah... it makes the readers follow and move along with the lines as you painted the picture through poetic words...
Very well composed. Makes readers to move along with its lines. Repetition is well used in this poem. Good one.
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7/19/2025 5:12:17 AM # 1.0.0
like hopscotch I hopped along a path built by an architect you are doing fine young man...I followed you very well, because you had writen it very well.