Saturday, November 23, 2019

The Last Night Train Comments

Rating: 4.4

Rose hast to dry into beloved sight
No shade shakes head like "yes"
No butterfly bitterly brings last lament
From farway farewell,
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Mamunur Rahman Kayes
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Chinedu Dike 25 May 2021

Nicely articulated and well expressed thoughts and feelings.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 December 2019

Thank you so much for reading my poem 'Love is all embracing" . So nice to know you live in the picturesque area of tea gardens in Bangladesh. Remain blessed dear Poet.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 December 2019

Dear Poet Kayes, A very sad poem of farewell but a poem that highlights the truth of life.Just with few lines, you have made a great impact that goes straight into the heart..........10

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Navod Dilhara 29 November 2019

A melancholy for a farewell.!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 November 2019

An excellent poem.... poignant expression! Many congratulations for this wonderful little poem being selected as Poem of the Day!

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 November 2019

In the middle of the night! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 November 2019

the last night train left the garden of rose left the soul of love...........! ! ! //

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Tom Allport 28 November 2019

A sorrowful write of tears falling at night.

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Kingsley Egbukole 28 November 2019

A nice poem. Interesting to read.

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Kostas Lagos 28 November 2019

Congratulations for this sorrowful masterpiece!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 November 2019

A well composed prose poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece.....10+++

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 November 2019

last night train went away carried away the rose, its color and infatuated fragrance oh with the heart of love this morning the bed of roses in lovelorn mourn!

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Shah Shirin Sharmin Shila 23 November 2019

wow what a beautiful poem......nice way to say inner talks

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Dr Al Mamun Syed 23 November 2019

nicely penned of goodbye. It is heart touching. thakns

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Mamunur Rahman Kayes

Mamunur Rahman Kayes

Sreemangal, Bangladesh
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