The Last Night Comments

nice....i like it alot......

You have done a fine job here..great beginnings..very well done..thank you..iip :)

I like it very much. Umm.... had a couple of typos.... try to not rush when typing. I know I make mistakes as well. Though very good point. Thanks for telling me to read this.

Well written, not much to say in the field of criticism, possibly pour some more out. it's a great deep poem and placed well with others like it

very nice. this poem shows that you are a good friend.