Saturday, May 31, 2008

The Last Moment Comments

Rating: 3.5

i did not realise that it was it
you were glowing with the long beam
your smile stick like a tatoo on my mind
your structure and the firmness of your body remained on my feelings
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Nkululeko Mdudu 03 June 2008

wow. often we don't realise things that happen at the time of their happening but later we look back and wish to change, lovely poem -nkuli

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