Wednesday, May 23, 2012

The Last Mile Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here I sit, late at night, bones languish.
But I know somewhere, your voice melodiously peals, morning church bells
I wonder, will it ever end, this dolorous anguish
But I glance at your face in my heart, and know that therein your indomitable spirit dwells.
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Barry Blander
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Virginia Pecho Gely 08 July 2012

Reaching and longing to be nearer and at last the last mile is at hand...No darkness and no whiteness count no more....just the touch of the yearning that ends....What a sollace to be again with the Beloved. This poem is full of romance and excitement to be with the ONE. Thanks for sharing and keep us lifted again and again.

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Romeo Della Valle 01 July 2012

Bravo! I take my hat off on your honor for posting such a powerful and well crafted write filled with touching and inspiring words. Emotions are clearly embedded in this thought provoking write that clearly shows your talent in the Poetry World! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep inspiring the World with more of your terrific writes and welcome back. Forgive me for the lateness in responding to your invitation! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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Godfrey Morris 08 June 2012

You did well on this piece. Verses are descriptive and captivating. Thanks for sharing

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Jessie Jett 26 May 2012

What a brilliant piece Barry!

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