The Last Man Standing Comments

He came across, he turn back nobody watch his back He is alone through that forest he walks without fear He is able to say yes even it no No he is the man that stands behind his family That protects his family, through anger he surrender He surrenders to anger to avoid anger wow this is killing me

u have to work on the rhyme which is the end of each line there must be music in each poem any way it's gd that u're trying to express ur feelings by writing i personnaly started to write stuff like that and with time they became poems keep it up, the best of luck :))

its ok, very soon you will find d words of expression.just dont stop writing.