Wednesday, January 15, 2014

The Last Love Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

Time has spun its mystery
The world falls fast away
Descending in a turning ball
Returning into clay
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Thomas Vaughan Jones
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To Windward 21 January 2014

Well constructed - you have an ability to bring images with few words.

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Adeline Foster 19 January 2014

Again sheer beauty and I agree, you have a way with words. Read mine - We the Unencumbered - Adeline

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Joseph Anderson 17 January 2014

A poignant, heart wrenching tribute to your lost love, with a great title. God, this touched me. I love your way with words

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Valerie Dohren 16 January 2014

Beautiful and poignant - recently lost my husband so I can relate.

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