Tuesday, June 23, 2015

The Last Look Comments

Rating: 4.5

When you look to the sky you see the stars and you will try to fly to get one
The moon light in the midnight, but I want to lookat you face
I live behind your eyes, I do not want to hear you cry
It is your choice to take advice
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Messaoud Allalouche
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 August 2017

A good attempt in the chapter of ars poetica. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Messaoud Allalouche 28 August 2017

thank you Jazib yes I will do

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