Sunday, February 3, 2008

The Last Kiss I Shall Ever Give Comments

Rating: 5.0

You gripped my heart with passion's fire
You filled my soul with true desire,
The first time that our eyes did meet
I felt my life was so complete,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ernestine Northover 27 March 2008

This is beautiful but so sad. I love the repeated two lines at the end of each verse, they are so moving. Excellent write. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 21 March 2008

You do this so easily Andrew, those emotions that are so hard to bear, you express them with full emotion Love duncan X

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Bonnie Collins 04 February 2008

Aw Andrew, this brought so many memories to my heart. You have such a wonderfully way of conveying your emoitions..... A Definate 10++ Bonnie Collins

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Thad Wilk 03 February 2008

Hi Andrew! A capturing poem lovely indeed to read! Thank you for sharing! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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cinderella princess 03 February 2008

wow i really like it

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foxy babii 03 February 2008

beautiful beautiful poem i truly like it

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