The Last Kiss Before Midnight Comments
I cannot hide from your gaze, I see through your eyes
And a kiss from you is a cloud that moves so slow across the sky.
Night's, night's wrapped in warmth but cool enough to warm
Your lips, lip's that when kissed are lip's I've not kissed, each kiss
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this i just sent as a message: James, though i would make some minor changes (and shall) and am unsure of your meaning in a few places, your poem is quite captivating. some readers will undoubtedly like it and envy the speaker! bri ;)
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8/13/2025 1:51:16 PM # 1.0.0
p.s. my 'changes' may be limited to getting rid of some apostrophes. i like army of arm's. i will change arm's to arms, and i don't know what it means, but it is 'poetic' and thought-provoking AND an alliteration; i LIKE alliterations! ! assuming I have a December showcase, this poem shall be in it. :)