Tuesday, April 29, 2014

The Last Hut Comments

Rating: 5.0

At the last hut of the village
Lives the girl of tender age
Her eyes though love filled
Meet only the long paddy field!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Chris G. Vaillancourt 05 May 2014

powerful delivery and well written poem...good work!

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Juan Olivarez 30 April 2014

Beautiful poem. Dreams do come true.

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Lorraine Colon 30 April 2014

What young girl has not longed for her boy to find her? Very nice heartfelt poem.

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Salini Nair 29 April 2014

a poem that ends with hope... like it sir............

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Anand Brown 29 April 2014

Beautiful poem, good use of imagery and the free verse. Evocative and engaging. A good read!

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