The Last Hours Of Autumn Comments

The last hours of Autumn- - What a vivid word painting of nature comes through your pen ! There is a light drizzle falling. I can hear it tapping a broken rhythm on the awnings like a novice drummer trying to find a rhythm which eludes him. When will he stop trying, and like me join the silence?

Taping of broken rhythm is heard well with beautiful expression and rich imagery of natural perception. A person moving alone feels glitter of joy of meditation of autumn.Distant stars give warmness. The Holy Shrine is outlined in beam of light. This is an outstanding poem beautifully and brilliantly presented...10

No painting could paint what you have painted here, Feeling, transcends greatly, your canvas As we feel your subjective visions, intensely, Far and near. Excellence needs very little praise, it shines by its own light.

I cannot resist a good nature poem. Well penned Daniel. ++10 Robert