Thursday, January 17, 2008

The Last Harbor Comments

Rating: 5.0

Too many ships have come and gone
sailing sea after raging sea

From within I knew only too
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Bonnie Collins
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Shashendra Amalshan 12 August 2009

'A Good many seas have come and gone since that fatefull day, and a good many more shall come after, however NEVER shall I sail as I once sailed in your harbor.........' you know this is very beautiful.. This is what real poetry is.. I mean these words had to come from your heart ma'am, , and that is why admire you.. I am telling you again, poetry is ever so beautiful when you put your heart and soul in to them... make the reader move with liines.. With rhyming one can see the lighter side of things though.. anyway this is beautiful! ! ! 1 lovess shan

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Robert Sheridan 14 September 2008

Bonnie, Gorgeous, simply gorgeous... you are a poetess c'est magnifique! Robert

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Francis Duggan 25 January 2008

What can one say on this poem except that it is an excellent piece of work well done Bonnie

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John Nightingale 17 January 2008

This is a wonderful poem. You describe exactly how my mother felt (and still feels) when my dad passed. A truly moving poem. Thanks again.

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