The Last Goodbye Comments
Look at me, please don't cry my darling;
it's nothing I will be just fine.
Smile, show me your beauty, let me
look at my love one last time
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This is very good but, Why the run-on: let me, the, I, for, I, and I'm? It mars an otherwise very good sensitive poem. Adeline
Wow, I love it, even though it almost put me in tears because I felt the emotion in it and it was strong. Very Nice Sayings
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7/19/2025 12:35:25 PM # 1.0.0
Great work, the loss come through. So very sad.