Thursday, June 8, 2023

The Last Fruit Gone - 4 Perished Comments

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The Last Fruit Gone - 4

The young mango tree was
so proud in its glory borrowed
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Rebecca Navarre 10 June 2023

Beautifully written! ..5 Stars! ..++++++++++++

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Thank you, Becca. I am so grateful to you.

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It's a kind of unwise charity to bear the weight of others responsibility. A great moral poem

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Very pertinent observation, dear poet. Thank you

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M. Asim Nehal 09 June 2023

Interesting and informative poem, the two tree have their own fruit bearing mechanisms. Thanks for sharing it nicely.5*****

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Thank you, dear poet. This is a short story, no a true incident unfurled before my eyes during the last a few months, in my orchard.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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