Thursday, June 8, 2023

The Last Fruit Gone - 3 Borrowed Glory Comments

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The Last Fruit Gone - 3

The pumpkin vine grew roots
at every hairy nodal foot
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Nabakishore Dash 09 June 2023

Beautiful rhymes used giving immense imageries.

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Nice observation. Thank you

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 June 2023

A meaningful and wonderful poem adorned with great imagery. Everything we have will perish in due time. They are just temporary.

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Great observation. Happy that my poem make you think philosophically..😃

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A most pertinent observation, Rose Marie. Thank you

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Bharati Nayak 08 June 2023

A thought provoking write! I ask the question, when mango tree is capable of sweet delicious fruit, what is its necessity to hanker after borrowed glory.

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This is the third part of the story. Please read the previous parts and you'll understand. The mango season was over and the mango was devoid of flowers, fruit and all glamour in which she'd basked

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Her longing for the lost glory made has accept the borrowed glory. Thank you, Bharati

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David Wood 08 June 2023

Alas, it's the same with politicians and celebrities. Great imagery Unnikrishnan, top marks.

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Thank you David, for reading and sharing your thoughts on the poem

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Borrowed glory does not last.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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