Wednesday, June 7, 2023

The Last Fruit Gone - 1 Comments

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A young mango tree
no flowers, no fruits
no bees and birds
she stands deserted
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Yes, dear poet everybody counts the fruits the tree produces and not the tree that produces the fruit.

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Wow! That is a wonderful observation.

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David Wood 08 June 2023

Number one in your series, but its the story of life from birth to to death unless you were norn with a silver spoon in your mouth, but having money can make people more unhappy. Tis life.

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The bees and flies left once the flowers gave way for tiny fruit. The birds that feed on the bees and flies also left with them. When the fruit started to ripen new birds who feed on ripe mangoes throng the mango tree

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What you say, that more wealth makes you unhappy, also could be true….

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"सुख के सब साथी दुःख में ना कोई" In your happiness everyone joins you, but you find none in your sorrow…

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We need to live with every ups and downs of life. You shall have more company when you are rich, but none when you are not….

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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