Tuesday, March 31, 2015

The Last Episode Comments

Rating: 4.5

I still remember the charming dawn,
When the shy moon behind a curtain,
Slept and exposed all her charms,
And the thirsty eyes without a refrain,
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Geetha Jayakumar 07 April 2015

A Beautiful poem on life, beginning from First Episode to the Last Episode. Loved the way you presented it.

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Valsa George 03 April 2015

The dawn symbolic of our early life has been pleasant and blemishless. The period extending from youth to middle age is the noon time of man's life! It is not a cake walk, but one with pain and joy coming in turn.Often we experience the contrast between desire and fulfillment then. Now when we are stepping into old age which is the dusk, we still have some desires left behind before saying the final goodbye! Enjoyed this symbolic write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 April 2015

Highly speculated and presented. Wonderful imagery. Many thanks.

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Hazel Durham 01 April 2015

With your great imagination you have created a spellbinding poem with amazing imagery!

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Khalid Saifullah 31 March 2015

A heart touching poem................................10

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Rakhi Jayashankar 31 March 2015

people would not value their presence when they are around but when they are not around they would not value anything but them when eyes r there we won't understand the importance

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