Thursday, August 20, 2015

The Last Dream Comments

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When my dreams are but an ember
Of the waning fire of life,
I shall have you to remember,
Your peace, your love..... just a bit of strife
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Lora Colon
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Kelly Kurt 24 August 2015

You have a passion that is eloquently expressed here, Lora.

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Jak Black 21 August 2015

Gone but not forgotten You live within my heart. Hold out your hand for me my love When my time comes to depart. A beautiful love poem, Lora. Fond memories are to be cherished. This poem has come from deep within. Some great lines here................. When my dreams are but an ember Of the waning fire of life, .......................a wonderful expression.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 August 2015

And when it's time for the last dream, My darling, come back for me! Come, take my hand while we cross that stream To love again in eternity..................................a nicely penned picture.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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