Monday, March 17, 2008

The Last Days - The Crucifixtion Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I hang here, stuck on this cross
I pray to my Father that not all is lost
I want them to see, I want them to know
The reason I'm here is only to show
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Marieta Maglas 09 November 2009

wonderful abstract poem, deep ideas well embedded, lovely rhymes, be blessed.10++++

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Colin J... 27 July 2009

Wonderful... Colin J...

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Dwayne Bailey 30 September 2008

Wow Wow Wow. This is beautiful and well written. The vision of Christ on the cross wanting to reach out even to the ones who are crucifying him is breathtaking. I truely love this poem! A 10 my friend. Dwayne

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Linda Moore 19 August 2008

God is Good, you have written a very nice piece. It is so Wonderful to know god is with us every day we are not ever alone. When we open our mind to him he fills us to overflowing.

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Pied Piper Berry 12 August 2008

You are truly talented. This poem is awsome and one I for one would be proud of. Great Job! I think you brought across the emotion quite well what Jesus thought, and felt on the cross.

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Kristi G 31 March 2008

wow..i really love this poem...it really gives a good picture of the Savior on the cross.... praise be to Him.

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Melvin Banggollay 17 March 2008

What a deep reflection of your heart and faith remembering the supreme sacrifice made fy the Son of man to save humanity from death and sin. Great poem and thanks for sharing. best wishes with the blessing s of the Holy Family. melvin

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