Sunday, November 13, 2005

The Last Days Of Ww Ii Comments

Rating: 2.5

It was an early bird,
this straggler of the sun,
a ray of gold with millions
of teensie diamonds,
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Savannah Churchill 14 November 2005

what is this obsession about old wars when we are killing so many now

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Kelly Allen Vinal 13 November 2005

Another masterpiece, H!

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Raynette Eitel 13 November 2005

This is indeed a very moving account of the last days of the war, well-told and poignant. You should get this published so that more people can read this account. Raynette

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Simon Whild 13 November 2005

A good grass-roots poem that cuts to the heart of what it was like at the end of WWII. My father was involved in the 'mopping-up' operations and this poem is very much like the sort of stories he tells. Very real, very well written.

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***** ********* 13 November 2005

A rare glimpse into the tragedy of civilian casualties of war Herbert. You describe the old lady so vividly, her strength almost bursts from the page, and those jaded soldiers left me feeling pity for them. I too thank you for sharing this tenderly composed record with us. 10 from peace loving Tai

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