The Earth circulates as we approach the last days,
Earthquakes dislocating landscapes,
Fatal mistakes the consequence of dangerous mates,
We love and we hate,
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This may be your first poem but I am sure that you have great talent....this shouldn't be your last poem...pls go on writing so many poems...all of the other pals are really eager to enjoy your poems! !
The last days for sure bro.