Friday, April 12, 2019

The Last Date Comments

Rating: 4.7

He sipped his drink
looking ahead
he couldn't look her in the eye
listening to her words softly spoken
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Aqua Flower
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Khairul Ahsan 19 April 2019

Letting is difficult, is painful, but if inevitable, taking a clean break gracefully energizes the empty mind. nature doesn't love vacuum; the void will be filled! Best wishes, AF

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Carl Roussell 12 April 2019

Letting go can be so painful even if it is the right thing to do.

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Aqua Flower 12 April 2019

Letting go to something you think is holding you up....when you finally let go, your realize you can fly.

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Aqua Flower 12 April 2019

letting go can be so difficult but sometimes after you let go, you realize you can still fly.

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Bill Cantrell 12 April 2019

In a world where love has become obscured by new and improved selfish pursuits, true love is extremely hard to find, when commitment is shunned it is best to let go of what is not there, good love deserves better...a really good poem aqua, good to see you writing again

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Aqua Flower 12 April 2019

So we'll said! The world has definitely changed!

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