the king of pop is now indeed
resting&living at last in peace
his life 2 his fans was not just an open book 2 read
but a history of giving&humanity which didn't cease
...
Read full text
we'll never forget him as long as the man hears& feels I liked the sentence....and i liked the whole poem coz i really loved Jackson...may he rest in peace....
his life 2 his fans was not just an open book 2 read but a history of giving&humanity which didn't cease Great poem Zeinab to the memory of the King of Pop. I love this poem for it strikes at the heart of humanity! Isaac 10+++
Touched.. it’s from your heart. The everlasting smile of the King enlightened through your thoughts. You are a born poetess who can blot the feelings in your handkerchief. Well done Zainab…. grief-stricken image of heartbroken smile… jaleel
the moon will miss it's walker &the flower will miss it's talker Beautiful tribute to the pop star.
zeinab u r a beautiful poet and this poem affected me really i know that i didn't write poems 4 along time but ur poem make everything i felt from sadness and sorrow 4 Michael Jackson go out from my heart u knw smthing i felt miserable and i tried 2 write a poem about him but i coudn't express my feelings at all i coudn't get out my feelings and write it on paper but u did it instead and i thank u alot and i feel now relaxed bec. as i told u i coudn't write a poem 4 him so thank ua zeinab thatnk u my best friend.
I don't know what to say but I'm writing on this idea and u will see it soon, it's as u took the words from my mouth and I'm happy that there is someone who shares my ideas. You are perfect! ! .
So loyal poem! ! to the King of POP! ! ........keep it up...10+++ Merna
I loved 'beat it' and ' billy jean'.They were awesome.Nice writes Zeinab.
the moon will miss it's walker &the flower will miss it's talker the smile will leave the faces for years &we'll never forget him as long as the man hears& feels well done friend..it has doen soo perfectly in romantic way dear poetess of romance.. liked this poem and liked the meaningful and deep thoughts regarding love at your age.. best of luck..10+++++++++++
the moon walker can't dance anymore for he lay down on earth and return back no more the moon walker can't sing on his lovely song in the field of glory, he on his grave stay alone...grace
very excellent poem dear, , you expressed exactly what you saw in poetic way..10++++
It is of course a big loss of our beloved Michael Jackson. You wrote exactly what we all are feeling about this great singer/dancer. I felt very sorry when i read his health condition in newspaper and i really prayed for his recovery. Anyway it is a very good tribute and thank you very much. Rgds Nooruddeen