Wednesday, July 8, 2009

The Last Dance Of The Moon Walker Comments

Rating: 4.8

the king of pop is now indeed
resting&living at last in peace
his life 2 his fans was not just an open book 2 read
but a history of giving&humanity which didn't cease
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Nooruddeen Mm 08 October 2009

It is of course a big loss of our beloved Michael Jackson. You wrote exactly what we all are feeling about this great singer/dancer. I felt very sorry when i read his health condition in newspaper and i really prayed for his recovery. Anyway it is a very good tribute and thank you very much. Rgds Nooruddeen

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Doha Ewiess 08 August 2009

we'll never forget him as long as the man hears& feels I liked the sentence....and i liked the whole poem coz i really loved Jackson...may he rest in peace....

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Isaac Maliya 21 July 2009

his life 2 his fans was not just an open book 2 read but a history of giving&humanity which didn't cease Great poem Zeinab to the memory of the King of Pop. I love this poem for it strikes at the heart of humanity! Isaac 10+++

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Jaleel Perinjanam 18 July 2009

Touched.. it’s from your heart. The everlasting smile of the King enlightened through your thoughts. You are a born poetess who can blot the feelings in your handkerchief. Well done Zainab…. grief-stricken image of heartbroken smile… jaleel

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 July 2009

the moon will miss it's walker &the flower will miss it's talker Beautiful tribute to the pop star.

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Lina Ehab 11 July 2009

zeinab u r a beautiful poet and this poem affected me really i know that i didn't write poems 4 along time but ur poem make everything i felt from sadness and sorrow 4 Michael Jackson go out from my heart u knw smthing i felt miserable and i tried 2 write a poem about him but i coudn't express my feelings at all i coudn't get out my feelings and write it on paper but u did it instead and i thank u alot and i feel now relaxed bec. as i told u i coudn't write a poem 4 him so thank ua zeinab thatnk u my best friend.

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Reem Ehab 09 July 2009

I don't know what to say but I'm writing on this idea and u will see it soon, it's as u took the words from my mouth and I'm happy that there is someone who shares my ideas. You are perfect! ! .

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Mubeen Sadhika 09 July 2009

Beautifully written poem. Nice composition.

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Eyan Desir 08 July 2009

Very nice you wrote this like a grown woman lol great job

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Sherif Monem 08 July 2009

Very nicely written and sweet.

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Merna Ibrahim 08 July 2009

So loyal poem! ! to the King of POP! ! ........keep it up...10+++ Merna

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 08 July 2009

I loved 'beat it' and ' billy jean'.They were awesome.Nice writes Zeinab.

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Afzal Shauq 08 July 2009

the moon will miss it's walker &the flower will miss it's talker the smile will leave the faces for years &we'll never forget him as long as the man hears& feels well done friend..it has doen soo perfectly in romantic way dear poetess of romance.. liked this poem and liked the meaningful and deep thoughts regarding love at your age.. best of luck..10+++++++++++

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Omar Ibrahim 08 July 2009

great job! ! ! ! keep on writing.........10++

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Lady Grace 08 July 2009

the moon walker can't dance anymore for he lay down on earth and return back no more the moon walker can't sing on his lovely song in the field of glory, he on his grave stay alone...grace

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very excellent poem dear, , you expressed exactly what you saw in poetic way..10++++

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Carol Gall 08 July 2009

beautiful poem to michael moon walker perfect title

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